We are currently working on our storyboard, and its a mess. I will upload a picture for the final draft. Right now its scribbles and short phrases; so difficult to understand of you weren't there while we wrote it.
As of right now it begins with him in the grocery store. Credits of us are put on the grocery items. Then suddenly when the credits are done, the love interest appears. Shot counter shot exchange occurs as we discover she is moving to the next town and will work there. He is noticeably upset. Unclear of the transition he goes outside and is cleaning up the parking lot of shopping carts. He is made fun of by a little kid and another kid shows up to defend him. The second kid is a close friend and a large reason as to why the main character is slightly childish too. They have a small exchange about his live interest and how he is going to go after her in a shopping cart. Unclear of this other transition, he is then home. Here we learn from some dialogue and mis-en-scene that his father is gone and his mother is over protective. The two minute opening ends with the beginning of his journey.
We are worried that we don't have enough time to establish his character and reasoning. But hopefully we quick edits and witty dialogue we can fullfil the 2 minutes effectively.
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